Wholly Illogical for WIPpet Wednesday


Hello there, fellow WIPpeteers – and, to those just along for the ride – welcome! Hop in, get comfy…but don’t leave popcorn in the center seat!

It’s time again WIPpet Wednesday, a weekly blog hop which encourages writers to move WIPs (works-in-progress) to publication by posting excerpts related to the date.We’re led by the capable fingers and nimble mind of Emily Wrayburn.

I’m running into the last possible hour to post this and still have it be Wednesday where I live.  I’ve got a good reason…I went shopping with Lise, who needed cooler-weather clothing. We had lunch a at local coffee shop Professor Java’s, where she loves the BLTs and fizzy pink lemonade.

We had a great time, and she found things she can be excited to wear through the coming months.

But now, on to the WIPpeting!

It’s time for another installment of my TnT fan fiction story, adapted from Humanity’s Enterprise. It’s a patchwork of stories, written in different styles, at different times, and for different projects. I’m slowly figuring out how to pull them all together into a coherent whole that explores just how and why T’Pol was the one Vulcan chosen to accompany Enterprise NX-01 on her maiden voyage.

I’ve decided to use this story, once revision gets to a point I’m comfortable with, as my initiation into Wattpad. So please don’t hesitate to let me know if something’s not working for you – it will make a better story in the long run!


Trip just got his comeuppance from Hoshi about the way he treated the new Vulcan Science Officer. Now, we switch back to T’Pol’s POV to see what happens next.

Here’s the standard disclaimer. I don’t own them; I don’t make money from them; I just love them, and I tell the stories they give me as well as I can.

WIPpet Math:

  • Today is October 25, 2017.
  • I have 3 sentences for you today. Why three? I subtracted the first digit of the day from the second: 5-2=3.

Wholly Illogical

T’Pol listened to the conversation between Commander Tucker and the Communications Officer – Ensign Hoshi Sato, according to the documentation Starfleet had provided to Ambassador Soval. She was uncertain she understood the human subtext, but the young woman was apparently attempting to protect her from poor treatment – a misguided emotional response, perhaps, as how the Chief Engineer and the Captain chose to interact with her was of no importance as regarded her orders from the Vulcan High Command.

Then Commander Tucker – Trip – appeared beside her station, and his scent precipitated a response within her that was wholly illogical.

Will T’Pol reveal her reaction to Trip’s scent?

What does Commander Tucker intend?

What are T’Pol’s orders from the Vulcan High Command?

Any guesses?

If you enjoyed this snippet, and want something more before next Wednesday, you can pop over to my fanfiction.net page.

And, as always, clicking the little blue froggy above will carry you on to other WIPpet offerings from our talented and diverse group of writerly folks. You can even add your own date-related excerpt if you’re so inclined!



    • I’m not quite sure T’Pol agrees, at this point. This can’t be easy for her, under the circumstances. Not that she’d expect it to be easy; that’s irrelevant. =D

  1. Heh, I love the different perspectives. Hoshi’s actions make perfect sense from a human point of view, but I can see how it would look unnecessary in T’Pol’s eyes. Sounds like she’s about to have an exercise in throwing logic out the window, though. Hopefully she contains her reaction!

  2. Hmm…I’ve been watching Discovery and suddenly have a whole new level of suspicion about High Command’s intentions. I love T’Pol’s attempt to ‘logicify’ Hoshi’s actions – there’s definitely a human logic at work, but probably misguided from a Vulcan’s POV. Will she tell Trip? It would be fun if she did! 😀

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